by Linda Courtland
In a seedy strip club on the outskirts of Toontown, Jessica Rabbit works the pole with faux abandon. She used to be a famous lounge singer, even starred in a movie one time, but now she just shakes and slides, competing for attention with her flame-haired arch-nemesis, Orange Sherbet. As the sultry music swells and dirty paws stuff dollar bills in her aging G-string, she scans the crowd for Roger. Jessica knows her cheating, drunken husband is a sucker for carrot-tops. Meanwhile, in a curtained corner of the club reserved for lap dances, Roger shows Sherbet what rabbits do best. He whispers sweet lies when it's over, and she melts.
6S - C2
Linda Courtland, with this contest entry, has now made her 6S debut!
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3 comments:
Excellent work, Linda! Nice to see the "bad side" of Toontown.
~Shaindel
You made a funny setting come alive, and I can still see your characters in my mind. Thanks for brightening my day with your cleverness.
This is hilarious -- you did such a great job of packing so many clever nuggets into only 6 sentences. I love the carrot-top line, and how OS melts at the end. I hope to see more from you soon.
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